Spiderman
Number of posts : 91 Age : 31 Registration date : 2008-10-05
Character Statistics Hero Experience Points: (99/1000) Spam Level: (0/10) Stats and Traits:
| Subject: Spiderman Sat Jun 06, 2009 10:23 pm | |
| Name: Peter Benjamin Parker Alias: Spiderman Age: 15 Gender: Male Race: Human Height: 5 feet 10 inches Weight: 165 lbs. Alliance:The Avengers Origin: Forest Hills, New York Hair: brown short staritght hair Eye: hazel Physique: slim/ slightly muscular Clothing: suits, t shirts with jackets, jeans, ect. Accessories: glasses occasionally Picture: _____________________________________________________________________________________ Personality: peter is considered two faced. in midtown high he is a shy timid "bookworm" who's popularity is at the very lowest. but when th puts on his spiderman mask he is the most sarcastic smartass in the marvel universe who's comebacks can only be rivaled by Deadpool. Peter begins to build to gain confidence from his hero carrer and now has openly come out of his shell. History: - Spoiler:
Orphaned as a baby when his parents were killed overseas in a plane crash as U.S. government spies, only child Peter Parker was raised by his elderly Uncle Ben and Aunt May. Academically gifted, Peter displayed an uncanny affinity for science that was nothing short of genius. Socially, however, he was painfully shy and the target of much cruelty by his peers at Midtown High School. Attending a public science exhibit when Peter was 15-years old, he was bitten on the hand by a radioactive spider accidentally irradiated by a particle beam, empowering Peter with the arachnid's proportional strength and agility, and the ability to cling to almost any surface. Most incredibly, he had gained a sixth sense that provided him with early warning of impending danger. Disguised, Peter tested his new-found abilities defeating professional wrestler Crusher Hogan in the ring, and earning some cash. Using his scientific prowess, he constructed a pair of artificial web-shooters that attached to his wrists. With an agent, a costume, and a new name, Spider-Man became an overnight sensation on television. Unconcerned with the rest of the world, he vowed to use his powers only to take care of himself and his aunt and uncle. After his first TV special ended, he allowed a burglar that he could have easily restrained to run past him and escape. A few days later, Peter returned home to find his beloved Uncle Ben had been shot and killed. When Spider-Man confronted the killer hiding in the old Acme Warehouse at the waterfront, he discovered to his horror that his uncle's murderer was the burglar he apathetically allowed to pass. Consumed with guilt, he became aware at last that with great power comes great responsibility, just as his beloved uncle had once said. To help his Aunt May with finances, Peter took a freelance job at the Daily Bugle selling pictures of himself as Spider-Man to publisher J. Jonah Jameson. Despite Spider-Man rescuing his son, astronaut John Jameson, from a malfunctioning space capsule, Jonah used his newspaper to publicly condemn Spider-Man as a menace. Unlike heroes like the Fantastic Four or the Avengers, Spider-Man was mistrusted and feared by the public. At school, his popularity was no greater, as "Puny Parker" frequently clashed with bully Flash Thompson and his followers. Flash's girlfriend, Liz Allan, often complicated matters, harboring a crush on "Petey" and making Flash jealous. The Avengers invited Spider-Man to join their ranks, but after facing the Hulk, he declined the offer, preferring the freedom of working alone a few weeks later he decided to join for more popularity among the media and to earn more cash by taking pics of spidey and his new friends.
_____________________________________________________________________________________ Traits Trait Points used: ?/15 (Each character starts off with 15 Traits Points, refer to the following link to find out more: Traits System) Name:peter parker Ability:Peter can cling to most surfaces, has superhuman strength (able to lift 10 tons optimally) and is roughly 15 times more agile than a regular human. The combination of his acrobatic leaps and web-slinging enables him to travel rapidly from place to place. His spider-sense provides an early warning detection system linked with his superhuman kinesthetics, enabling him the ability to evade most any injury, provided he doesn't cognitively override the autonomic reflexes. he also has organic web glands in his wrists that can shoot organic webbing by applying pressure on the wrist.he is very in tune and aware of the area around him. Stats (All characters start off with 32 Stat Points) [This is a new system and will be updated later] Strength:9 Defense:9 Speed:10 Accuracy:2 Intelligence:2 | |
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| Subject: Re: Spiderman Sat Jun 06, 2009 11:24 pm | |
| Your character registration has been... DENIED! Good attempt in following the template BUT you have made several MAJOR MISTAKES. - NO CANON CHARACTERS are allowed, which means that characters from the Marvel comics are not allowed and Spider-man/Peter Parker is a Canon Character. If you are wondering when has this rule been implemented, look here: Forbidden Character.
- Secondly, you don't really need so to put so many pictures. 1 picture of your character is enough.
- Thirdly, you have failed to fill in the Traits page correctly and it is evident you have not read or have not bothered to read the following thread: Traits System.
It's rather disappointing to see that you have not read through the Rules and Guidelines even when you are an old member. I hope I have not been too harsh and I do hope that you can do even better job if you plan to re-do your character registration profile. |
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Spiderman
Number of posts : 91 Age : 31 Registration date : 2008-10-05
Character Statistics Hero Experience Points: (99/1000) Spam Level: (0/10) Stats and Traits:
| Subject: Re: Spiderman Sun Jun 07, 2009 1:30 am | |
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